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they weren’t my images, i thought : original photopoem poetry
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dVersepoets Prompt – Poetics – Awareness of the Experience
hosted by sheila and walter w smith
i had already told folk i was just too busy to post, though i did visit and experience some great responses to the prompt on dversepoets today
yet i was able to finish my projects for the coming week, some big chunks of stuff needing getting done in prep –
and though i still have some personal projects that need getting started (much less being getting done 😉 ) i’ve just kept returning to the prompt, one i like so much, becoming aware of one’s personal response to the moment, and in this case particularly, to images
the sets of images i’ll use here, to create a photopoem as i like to call it 😉 are provided by walter, a digital artist who’s variety of texture color tone and degrees of layering-restructuring, is really a delight
i’ve rarely ever used anyone else’s images for my photopoem work, mostly because i feel i won’t have the internal emotional impact of using images i’ve chosen with my own seeing, my own eye, my own desire –
but i felt this was worth the exception, and risk, of just plain falling flat as a dry leaf run over by a semi 😉
here goes –
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They Weren’t My Images, I Thought
i didn’t draw my eye to this and capture it like
ice cream melting off a summer cone in texas
hurriedly hungrily reckless to its usefulness or arty-
ness
though once i stopped and sat my mind on it
which is how my heart likes for me to
co-ordinate, behave, myself

and found i agreed to disagree with myself
not wanting to remove pain that taught
me what pain is, learning me to
teach myself the value of
my uncertain future
even if
uncertain mostly to me
anyways
and
gazing on the rolling golden round disrupting
– playfully i decided –
the ruffled purpled oceans flower shells dancing dolphin like

betrayed the first site’s thoughts – confirming my own pit-nicky
bias –
pain remembered is pain honored not forgotten
even winter’s harshest stripes of white whipping cold-welts
passes –
the floral layering leafed with greens carrying scents of seeds
birds gladly drop to earth, the patterned
look –
a washing-machine’s gentle rinse of the tillings the
soul
took uninvited

but accepted under the oval rainbow of the light
wind fluttering waves and spray and wisps
of cotton breathing in the salted air
saving us our moisture
in the needy heat
not forgetting the primal
pain
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but setting it back wet
into its ocean
i cross the bridge of colors set upon the
the darkness where
in light
all color comes
and
in pigment
all
color
returns
the spectrum playing itself upon the retina’s
of someone else’s eyes
i thought
but i saw them too
the else’s images
they asked me
if i did
really did
remember the pain twisted moments set in muscle
and i said, yes, but more the release and remembrance
of the ocean waters i’d seen before
and more
the ruffled layers with rolling
lavendars
and
more the sign of caution
asking us
if we really truly can remove ourselves from ourselves
no –
i said
and the images were mine….
© 2012 adam light creations / adan lerma
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Indeed, nicely done. You have a gentle way of pulling us into your (uni)verse which flows as gently over the consciousness as waves over the sea. Many memorable lines, which deserve re-reading. Without a doubt, pulling a unified narrative from all the photos requires a special kind of consciousnes. That ability to unite with the object is truly admirable.
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thanks so much charles! esp glad you felt the impact “gentle” as it took some tooth-pulling on some of those sections 😉 multiple images not-of-a-set are trickier than serial images from one event ( see my photopoem at : http://wp.me/p1kLQ4-17i )
i’m humbled by your kind words regarding special unifying etc, but i really really think we all can do it, it’s just practice id’ing and becoming more and more aware of your responses, and put them down as they go!
‘course sometimes i either don’t pull it off (natural) or wish i hadn’t 😉
i enjoyed this one, interesting images from walter
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what a glorious adventure you have crafted, and the intertwining of walter’s images was so creative. I really like how you started off being hesitant about using someone else’s images and then ended by saying they became yours. Doesn’t get much closer to the “collective conscience” than that I suppose. I am so glad you came back and posted this. It is wonderful!
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well, i had a reply and don’t know where it went 😉 late hours and late years 😉
but anyway! thank you sheila, yes, it is like an adventure, esp using multiple unrelated images, it’s fun!
i knew right off i had to somehow express the angst of using someone else’s images, yet making them my own, plus the process getting there
glad too i was able to come back and post 😉
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not only did you use one but all of them…nicely done adan…and pain remembered is pain honoured…not forgotten…i grew up in the atmosphere of forgive and forget, which says it really did not matter…the thing is it did…so the forgetting part always struck me odd…anyway that is where your thoughts took me today…glad you joined in…smiles.
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glad i did too brian, thanks 😉
forgetting’s never been best for me, forgiving – yes
and yea, gotta agree, it does matter, a lot!
yea, using multiple unrelated images can be quite a trip, enjoyed it 😉
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