dVerse Poets Pub: Meeting the Bar: Impressionistic Writing – Accelerating Into the Curve

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Accelerating Into the Curve

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dVerse Poets Pub Prompt : Meeting the Bar: Impressionistic Writing

hosted by Claudia Schoenfeld

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claudia, traveling about europe (where she lives) happened on an impressionist exhibit and was inspired for the “meeting the bar” prompt featured this week

besides the absolutely stunning monet featured at the top of the page, which i believe i saw once, or a variation of it, in a converted museum-house in paris, she wrote this, which is thought was perfectly on :

But details weren’t their focus anyway, it was the mood of a moment, a feeling, fleeting, moving. Monet once said “For me a landscape does not exist in itself, it changes every moment in appearance, but the surrounding atmosphere brings it to life.”

it hard enough doing approximate justice visually to the impressionist legacy, much less verbally with words, but to feel inspired to do one’s own “take” on our own personal moments, here and now in our own unique times, is justification enough i believe 😉

if you can, stop by and see the full prompt, and even more enticing, the myriad poetic responses one can enjoy, as a reader a writer a painter a lover and simply curious 😉

best wishes everyone!

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Accelerating Into the Curve

when i was twelve

pressing my bike

round and down

the curve from

my house

i

felt the pebbles

nudge the back

tire

but i held on

barely

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when i was twenty

gunning the gas

little by little

feeling the

four

wheels under me spin-

turning the corners

i

felt the shift of the weight

of the car

pulling out from under

me

but i held on

slowly

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when i was nearly thirty

my young son beside

me

inside

the great american scream

machine

the

roller coaster bursting

a dip a rise and a turn

back down

the mountain of

track

we both held on

dearly

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and now having past

sixty

reaching the

time

when i can settle and do

what i’d like

ha ha

i

feel myself

leaning a shoulder into the

wind

glancing back at what went by

squeezing my time

into stop-watch

stop-action

moments

my life

my heart my hands

smiling

accelerating into the last curve

fully

© 2012 felipe adan lerma

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20 Responses to dVerse Poets Pub: Meeting the Bar: Impressionistic Writing – Accelerating Into the Curve

  1. ManicDdaily says:

    This is just wonderful. I want to read your novella, when I get some time. But this one terrifically sweet. k.

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    • yoga-adan says:

      thanks so much k! means a lot to me 😉

      yeah, my novella includes some issues that cover a scope of time too, but in prose of course

      i’ve wanted to have it priced for free, and kobo and smashwords have so far, but i decided to just post it online for people without readers or not registered with one of the online book sellers

      the novella is, i think, slower to begin with, but builds; anyway, thanks again so much 😉

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  2. zongrik says:

    i like the stop action moments of life, compared to accelerating the curve.totally opposites. made me think of Newton’s Laws of Motions. F=ma for the acceleration and stop action for the inertia (something no in motion will stay that way without a force chancing it). Life is Newton’s Laws!!

    foam

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    • yoga-adan says:

      i like both, and think both are integral parts of life

      this poem obviously, as per the title, focusses on the curve 😉

      and, ironically, in the placing of the movement in those curves i’ve experienced in life so far, kinda create a stop action moment – part of the magic of art i think

      thank you so much for your comment, it really made me think about this a little deeper

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  3. kkkkaty says:

    We baby boomers can really take things to another level, can’t we? Each time it’s a bit different but still the same effort behind it ..

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    • yoga-adan says:

      that’s exactly it!

      “Each time it’s a bit different but still the same effort behind it ..” perfectly said 😉

      and really like your “about me” katy, left side of your site’s pages – a very interesting lady it appears 😉

      thanks so much!

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  4. claudia says:

    my life

    my heart my hands

    smiling

    accelerating into the last curve

    fully….this is great… it’s good to lean in with a thankful heart… there’s so much joy and wisdom in this one felipe

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  5. margaretbednar says:

    Just Lovely! You didn’t mention the age under 12… I bet your mother was very busy watching you! 🙂

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  6. Mama Zen says:

    This is really excellent! I enjoyed it tremendously.

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  7. Susan says:

    Applause, standing ovation, encore!
    I love the parallels joined by the motion, the sensation of thrill, a memory you will recognize and can reach for whether it is in your mind an body or only in your body. There is no possibility of losing this love, this spark. I wish that for you, who have made me–in an instant–scan my life to see if I have something so similarly multi-dimensional and satisfying.

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    • yoga-adan says:

      thrilled that you liked it so much, and even more so that you felt compelled to scan your own rich history –

      you won’t but help but have much much much you can claim and put into your work –

      bet some of that will involved austin too 😉

      i’ve a post of a painting i did called “austin at night” – one of my favs

      thank so much susan 😉

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  8. brian miller says:

    smiles…love the little glimpses into your life…the curves…and i hope that last one goes getly for you but still carries the same bit of a thrill…smiles….

    and hey i wrote a sportd poem for you tonight…smiles.

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  9. Felipe, love this (being on the far side of 60. One thing that really struck me was how you incorporated the kinesthetic as a sensory detail. Great!!!

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    • yoga-adan says:

      now is that “far” like 61, or “far” like 69 😉 just kidding, no need to answer! 😉

      touch and movement, felt before sound was a sound and was first a vibration running through us

      thanks so much victoria 😉

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  10. Awesome write, Adan! I can relate to all those times and especially to now!

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