dVersePoets Pub – OpenLinkNight Week 47 : “Venus in Transit Across the Sun”

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“Venus in Transit Across the Sun”

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from tashtoo’s prompt :

“Sometimes, the only thing we can do in this rough and tumble world is buckle down and wait out the rough spots. I’ve had a few lately….”

that’s about all the prompt i needed 😉

Venus in Transit Across the Sun

yesterday and

today

a spot of shadow

crossed the face of the burning sun

like a child, face to the thick

clear glass of an

aquarium

housing sharks and electric eels

crossing across such raw power

any day

much less

the same two days

my wife has had her

surgery

we told each other

literally

a sign…

crossing the face of god in awe

humbled

but making our way

to the other side

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June 6, 2012

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17 responses to “dVersePoets Pub – OpenLinkNight Week 47 : “Venus in Transit Across the Sun””

brian miller

June 15, 2012 at 6:10 pm

glad you can be there for her man….and my best wishes for her continued recovery…

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 15, 2012 at 6:24 am
  
  thanks so much for the follow; appears your site is passionately dedicated to writers and writing of horror films; not my own chosen preference 😉 but good to see you doing well with it; best wishes 😉
  
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Victoria C. Slotto

June 8, 2012 at 12:41 pm

Such a great blending of a cosmic and life event. Your similes made it come to life.

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 8, 2012 at 8:57 pm
  
  thanks victoria, that means a lot to me 😉 as above so below, i guess it never ceases to be true 😉
  
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Susan

June 7, 2012 at 11:49 pm

I love how you give the convergence of the two events significance here, and love especially your comparisons: “a spot of shadow / crossed the face of the burning sun / like a child, face to the thick / clear glass of an / aquarium.” (sorry to change the shape of the lines for the moment–I do so love the symmetry of the page) Then the face is the face of God, and absent–but totally there in its absence–is the face of your dear wife, who is surely held in the Light of God through this prayer. Wow!

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 8, 2012 at 8:03 am
  
  thank you so so much susan, love your read of this, right spot-on my intent and feeling 😉 she’s struggling, but very hopeful 😉
  
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claudia

June 7, 2012 at 3:57 pm

oh hope she’s doing well…not easy..and the way to the other side can be tiring and difficult but sure you will make it… all the best for your wife

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 7, 2012 at 8:20 pm
  
  she’s doing better, gonna be a slow trek, not easy as you say, but be worth it, thanks so much claudia, we appreciate it
  
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leahJlynn

June 6, 2012 at 11:52 pm

I like your vision, and the way you expressed an historical event, wonderful read.

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 7, 2012 at 6:53 am
  
  thanks so much leah, i appreciate it 😉
  
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brian miller

June 6, 2012 at 10:32 pm

so your wife is ok after surgery? did not get to see the passing myself…but the pictures today have been pretty amazing…

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1. yoga-adan
  
  June 6, 2012 at 11:01 pm
  
  she is “ok” – surgery itself seems to have gone really well, but since she doesn’t take meds etc, the surgery meds are just now wearing off, so the onset of the pain (total knee replacement) is really shocking her, so today, two baby stutter-steps 😉 nausea etc, but i’m very hopeful, but gonna have to keep a close eye; she’ll be in hosp for a few more days minimum, but we have our youngest girl from texas for another week which really helps out; just have not been able to do much else, gotta get some rest, return tomorrow (youngest with her now); hope to dribble in some readings and comments later this week; ps – only seen the pics myself too, what a sight! thanks so much brian, g’nite 😉
  
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  1. brian miller
    
    June 13, 2012 at 6:34 pm
    
    so a week later how is she? i am glad you had help this week as well…
    
    good to see you today man.
    
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    1. yoga-adan
      
      June 13, 2012 at 7:23 pm
      
      she’s doing really well with her mobility, meds messing w/her digestion, but i think we’re getting a handle on it now 😉 slowly 😉
      
      yea, great help from youngest girl, she goes back to tx tomorrow, but Big help
      
      though i was counseled, i didn’t realize how much minute to minute, day to day attention this would need, so kinda slowly coming back to doing other stuff, little by little, like my wife’s steps 😉
      
      thanks brian
      
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    2. claudia
      
      June 14, 2012 at 1:03 am
      
      just thought i’d ask that same question as well and saw your answer to brian already… good to hear that it’s slowly going better…all the best and blessings for the two of you
      
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      1. yoga-adan
        
        June 14, 2012 at 11:46 am
        
        thanks so much claudia, the meds around the clock and routines needed to get better are paying off, even if slowly 😉
        
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